No One Can Understand

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No One Can Understand

Your light shines in my eyes,
but I wish you'd rise so that you can set.
Because during your rein
he just yells.
I can't deal with it anymore-
I'm crawling on the floor-
He's screaming.
All I want to do is cry,
but he calls me a child.
I'm drowning-it's wet-
He's screaming.
All I want to do is die
I let go to fall,
but he's pulling me up again-
He's screaming.
I cry out "Why?"
He calls me a child.
I'm broken on the floor-
He's screaming.
Your light no longer shines.
I no longer fear just your rise-
He's screaming.

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toredbloodink commented on No One Can Understand

03-14-2017

Wow I by just read this again. I'm still in great debate of life. This is beautiful no matter what it means... After I read the poem I saw redbloodink had commented before . I am the original redbloodink.... Amazing write

redbloodink commented on No One Can Understand

06-15-2010

Is it man or God....... Man is the yeller and God is subtle...... No-one should yell at us.... I turn and run from it...... red

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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