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  • Lost Love

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    I know now that I love him.
    It looks so simple when written;
    Like the pen didn't hover-
    the Poet didn't struggle-
    to make such a weighted declaration
    final-permanent-openly stated.
     
    You'd never know
    that such an epiphany
    is doubled edged-a sword
    that cuts only her.
    Because once it's said-
    it can't be withdrawn-
    but more so-even though it's said-
    it won't matter-
    it won't change anything.
     
    It only makes the pain more acute.
    The loss that much greater-
    it only makes her realize
    that she never lost anything
    because she never had it to begin with.
     
    The pain is so great-
    she can't even cry.
     
    So silly for a mortal to love a God-
    But I know now-that I do love him.
     
    The pen hovered.
    the blood drawn.

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    toredbloodink commented on Untitled

    03-14-2017

    And the stain leaves the heart.. I love to see raw bleeding writes like these. They help another see healing is possible beautifully done the picture i got to see was two people coming together after brokeness in love.. Amazing ...Redbloodink

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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