You Told Me It Would Be This Way

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    You Told Me It Would Be This Way

    Was it different-
    When you thought
    every sculpted line
    had a bit of you-
    a bit of me?

    Now-
    When my mind is
    muttled by others-
    new situations-
    new places-
    new things-
    do you find it's simply
    not the same?

    Is your mind muttled-
    with jealousy-
    heartbreak-
    betrayal-
    do you feel replaced?

    Push me away
    when you told me
    that it would end-
    Well now you're right-
    it ended up this way . . .

    Every sculpted line-
    had a bit of you-
    a bit of me . . .

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    toredbloodink commented on You Told Me It Would Be This Way

    03-14-2017

    Sculpted lines of words but never bits of me... I only put all of me into my writes .... I'm not sure if I have this many that I like as much as yours.... I think your pieces are amazing... Red

    kingone43 commented on You Told Me It Would Be This Way

    07-28-2009

    I ike Your Poem Very Much. Nice Work. Very Nice Way Of Saying Things.

    LluviaPhoenix

    07/28/2009

    Thank you very much!

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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