No Shoulder

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    No Shoulder



    "Are we there yet?" In unison, red corduroys,
    pink bathing suits, invisible impatient noise:
    sniffle, whine, shriek. Each call of their wild pitched so
    poignantly to a parent's crystal patience. No:
    ten more miles, six more lights, four more minutes. The joys

    promised in picture perfect pamphlets are worn toys
    flying over the front seat; this bold truth annoys
    the driver. His blank-faced, back-of-head eyes know
    this divided territory. "Are we there yet?"

    is scrolled in finger breath for the toll collector, poised
    to snatch hard earned sand through fingers. The backseat boys'
    choir warming up, scales the walls of sound below
    A flat. Precision packed contents of the trunk blow
    around the quiet road. Next year, kidless; St Croix's
    package deal is always a hope. "Are we there yet?"

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    bandit1192 commented on No Shoulder

    04-05-2009

    Who hasn't lived this poem? As I read it, I pictured every trip The kids and I ever experienced. Good job. TS

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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