Obsessed

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    Obsessed

    I'm obsessed with a guy i love, that's just the way it is.
    I would do anything for him, my life is wholy his.
    So honestly you can't call me out, from the depth of my situation,
    when i say that my logic is why should i live, if he is not takin.
    I live to make him happy, i want to see him smile,
    surely it'd be worth my while, to condemn myself so as to make his life easier, to redeem him of a unwanted lover,
    But for now i'm far to greedy, the fact deeply displeases me,
    i don't have the generosity to let myself be deprived,
    But even though i covet him still without trying to give him light,
    Now i say my wistfull goodbye, readying for the date i die.

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    Dusty commented on Obsessed

    05-05-2009

    Very obsessed! I enjoyed reading.

    alaskawriter96

    07/14/2009

    Thank you Dusty!If u have any suggestions for my writing i would greatly appreciate it. I look forward to reading urs!

    TheBean commented on Obsessed

    04-14-2009

    Dude, really man......

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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