Oddly Enough I like you

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    Oddly Enough I like you

    You say things that are so unexpected,

    Your mind a melting pot of perversion.

    That grin of yours losing its grip and turning upside down.

    You’re strange,

    Oddly enough I like you.

    How vulgar you are,

    The questions you ask.

    The things you assume.

    Your marriage proposals.

    When you let me ask you my questions.

    When you let me be inappropriate in public,

    The rambling,

    The cat pictures.

    I hate your sister but oddly enough I like you.

    Your strangely bouncy hair

    The way you write your name.

    The things you say.

    Oddly enough I like you.

    I like your malfunctions,

    Your random quirks.

    How you sneeze and laugh like a four year old.

    Oddly enough I like you.

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    BringMeBullets commented on Oddly Enough I like you

    11-02-2009

    This is really cute, and I like that you repeated "Oddly enough I like you," within the poem. Great job. :)

    Mangus commented on Oddly Enough I like you

    07-25-2009

    I thought it was interesting how you picked out the quirks. To demostrate love

    ginga commented on Oddly Enough I like you

    07-22-2009

    chalkout, very interesting reflection on humanity and relationship. It keps the reader thinking "what's coming next?" I like the flow of this one. ginga

    graceladymn commented on Oddly Enough I like you

    02-11-2009

    There is something in everything.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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