Out Of Place

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  • Hurt

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    I feel so un_happy un_love un_cool out of place when i am with my ''friends'' that i only  ''hang'' with when they have nothing to do

    Out Of Place

     Everything is feeling so out of place,
    As I pace,
    My life unraveling,

    I'll never reach the stars,
    What a nice dream, for my cold heart,
    No use to believe in a fresh start,
    I'll never be at the top of the charts,

    I am so weak,
    I dont think I can be strong,
    I think I'm about to break,
    I cant hold on,

    It must be nice to glow like a token,

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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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