OUTSIDER

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    OUTSIDER

    Doctor.

    My life is divided by a partition,

    a one-way mirror,

    where I hear socialites laughing, 

    and students discussing Gorges

    in the lounge of some university.

     

    So it is,

    My life is divided by a one-way mirror

    where people can be heard dancing to Rock,

    the soul of Rhythm and Blues,

    or whatever else they listen to.

     

    My life, it is divided by a one-way mirror,

    where I hear gossiping at slumber parties

    and yuppies having philosophical conversations.

    That’s right, a one-way mirror where I see crowds

    congregating in chapels.

     

    These people do not hear me

    and are utterly oblivious.

    They do not see me or have any idea

    what I would do to be a part…

    for just a moment.

     

    But maybe they do know I am on the opposite side

    and opt to ignore.

    My life, Doctor, it has always been divided,

    isolated from the world

    by this one-way mirror.

     

     

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    DeepEclipse commented on OUTSIDER

    07-20-2010

    The torment of knowledge. Or wisdom. Or too much of both. Maybe why mad men go mad. Not because they are actually crazy. Just cuz they get sick of the complacent flow of the norm. Yet no one else wants to ride. Isolation. Hard times man. Feelin this piece.

    AbysmalGoddess commented on OUTSIDER

    05-14-2009

    we seem to have a lot in common by the sounds of this poem, i absolutely adore your metaphore of the one way mirror. funny, i was just lookin at one of those... amazing poem, you've got talent!

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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