Picture Painting

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    Picture Painting

    Life washes away
    Like a picture in a window
    gone in a disarray of dirty water
    color behind it green and bright
    all life down the drain

    Life brings wind with it
    blows in changes and blows them away
    before you get any chance to say
    how you feel and what you know
    so you will change away

    Life blows
    it sucks so much it kills
    but it lifts you out of bed
    it tells you off
    it keeps you awake

    Life washes away
    life winds up and pushes
    life blows
    we get that
    but you always remember the truth

     

     

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    SilverGirl commented on Picture Painting

    05-30-2009

    You have such deep feelings dear heart.. for such a young lady.. you are very descriptive.. Good job.. looking forward to watching you grow on your poetic journey... hope you get a chance to read mine too and comment and rate.. im sort of downhearted today..so i could use a lift.. xox hugs Silver Girl

    Bob12164

    05/30/2009

    i have read a few of yours, they are quite good actually! Where do find ur insiration?

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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