"Loss of Love" - A Sonnet

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    "Loss of Love" - A Sonnet

    To try to win the heart of someone dear
    Appeals not to all but very few,
    For their deepest and most dreaded fear
    Is to find their emotions are so new.
    The paths of trickery they have tried
    To avoid the feelings that they feel,
    To run, escape, and even to hide
    From that, which to most, does not appeal
    Love is an ever winding, twisting path
    Which keeps us lost and ever wandering.
    We hope to avoid all the aftermath
    Of this confused and ever changing thing.
    Avoiding mistakes of love in the past
    In life's race we will come in very last.

    Ryan Shreve - Age 16

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    Helios commented on "Loss of Love" - A Sonnet

    08-05-2009

    You seem to combine the traditional English sonnet with the more free verse sonnet... bravo.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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