"My Dad"

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    "My Dad"

    My dad is my dad, and he is the best,
    He is always worried about my tests.

    He loves cake with ice cream,
    And he is always in my dream.

    My dad is very tall,
    And he likes to play basketball.

    He loves sports
    And hates short shorts.


    Written by:

    Brianna J. Brown

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    orsonav commented on "My Dad"

    06-25-2009

    This is a very funny poem. Your father must be very proud of you. Keep celebrating and writting about your family. You seem to write well about funny things and your family. You should keep writing about family and having fun., Great Job1
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    wheelsal commented on "My Dad"

    06-24-2009

    Hey Brianna, sounds like your dad is the greatest and have to be high up there too. From a grandma and one of your mom's greatest fans. Sally
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    FLAWLES commented on "My Dad"

    06-24-2009

    Your dad is a very lucky man; and he, along with your mom should always be in your dreams. He worries about your tests because he wants YOU, to be the best. Good work.
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    brianna00

    06/24/2009

    Thank you for your kind words! God bless you! Brianna

    UnworthyFather commented on "My Dad"

    06-24-2009

    Brianna, from me to you, your dad sounds like a really cool guy! I am sure that he loves you very much. Who wouldn't? I really like your poem. Keep writing, and I will keep reading! Thank you for sharing such great poems! 10
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    brianna00

    06/24/2009

    Mr.Marcus thank you for your kind words.

    jademelissa74 commented on "My Dad"

    06-24-2009

    Hey...Bebe must have helped you post the picture ha? Your daddy is going to fall off his chair with joy in his heart from reading your poem baby doll! I love your imagination! A huge 10 from your lifetime admirer!
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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