"My Mom"

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    "My Mom"

    My mom is my mom and my queen,
    But sometimes, she can be mean,
    My mom can also be calm,
    She likes all types of songs.

    She is very pretty and very nice,
    She likes soda with ice,
    She is very cool,
    And loves to go to the pool!

    She is great, she is fun,
    And she loves cinnamon buns!

    Written by:

    Brianna J. Brown

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    Artie commented on "My Mom"

    06-27-2009

    Wow!! What a great poem! You have talent little lady. This is the second poem I've read from you, and they just keep getting better. You are very fortunate to have such a wonderful family. The picture you chose is beautiful. I happily give you a 10 for this poem.
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    orsonav commented on "My Mom"

    06-25-2009

    It is very good to have a mom that allows you to have fun. You and your mom have a very special relationship. Keep writing good poems about your mom. I am sure you have plenty of nice things to say about her. Great poem.
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    FLAWLES commented on "My Mom"

    06-24-2009

    Hi Bri. This is just too cute. Keep it up. Reading this was like actually watching a flower bloom. And that's a pretty picture of you mommy. Don't tell her I said so.
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    brianna00

    06/24/2009

    My mom is so pretty and my dad is handsome to. Thank you for your kind words.God bless you. Brianna

    jademelissa74 commented on "My Mom"

    06-24-2009

    OMG! I am not very fond of this picture Brianna!!!! I said I would let you choose the picture and I wish you guys would have consulted with me first :)) I respect your wishes my love! God bless you. Your lifetime admirer....mommy!
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    brianna00

    06/24/2009

    Ha ma! Thank you for your comments mommy. Love Brianna

    UnworthyFather commented on "My Mom"

    06-24-2009

    Such a beautiful girl!!! Such a wonderful tribute to a very special Mom! Very good job, Brianna! Another ten from me. Thank you for sharing. Marcus
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    brianna00

    06/24/2009

    thank you mr. marcus and god bless you. brianna

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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