"OUCH"

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  • Lost Love

    "OUCH"
    Trust?
    You stole it.
    Love?
    You didn't want mine.
    Honesty?
    You didn't have any.
    Responsibility?
    You laughed in it's face.
    Me?
    I loved you.
    You?
    You loved her.
    Hate?
    You instilled.
    Crazy?
    I was.
    Selfish?
    You were.
    Considerate?
    I was always.
    Care?
    You didn't,
    And with that
    came the biggest pain.
    Let go?
    I did.

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    graceladymn commented on "OUCH"

    02-21-2009

    There is more begging to be written here, I hope you consider what it is that longs to be said and write it in another piece. This is a nice start to something else much deeper than letting go.
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    majestic commented on "OUCH"

    02-16-2009

    That was very deep young sista. Keep it up for real.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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