sudden tears

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    sudden tears
    im just sitting her
    chatting.
    then they race down
    its finally coming out
    all my anger and pain
    all the hurt its flowing out
    where is this coming from
    just out of the blue.
    i am blue.
    i miss my younger years.
    something is telling me to say goodbye
    i wont give up
    ill live my life.
    somebody please help me!
    i cant control the tears.
    there so sudden

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    susanhfire commented on sudden tears

    08-05-2009

    love your poem it breaks my heart but at the same time it inspires me to write about my inner feelings too. You write with alot emotions
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    Phoenix9 commented on sudden tears

    08-04-2009

    nice flow of emotion, very well expressed...............
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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