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    "Profile"

    When people look at me.
    I wonder what they see?

    Looking into my eyes;
    am I a hard person to read?

    Am I 2 nice and easy to run over?
    Easy to take for granted, neglected; 2 jovial?

    A perpatrator; fake inside and out?
    Already labeled and no one has a clue as to what I'm about.

    They don't know, they don't care.
    Alive or dead; here or there.

    Smiling faces then a knide in the heart.
    Stabbed numerous times, but I don't come apart.

    I'm a strong, black woman; just phenomenal.
    Not conceded; out of this world--astronomical.

    I've been through a lot and sill hold my head up high.
    Can't let people, stress, problems weigh me down--pride.

    Opinions...more negative, less positive.
    I'm a person of few words; objective.

    So when you look at me....
    I'm curious to know what it is you see.

    Look into my eyes...
    Read me, size me....

    You can't.
    I'm too deep.

    A ? mark.....an unsolved mystery.

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    Romano commented on "Profile"

    10-29-2009

    You have to be this way in order to have self confidence, you must encourage yourself and stay strong

    suga2224

    10/29/2009

    Yes, thank you. I appreciate it.

    tsgirl commented on "Profile"

    06-01-2009

    Yes you are a deep young black woman who is on her way of being who she really is your profile above your title I can read it well, keep up the good work and keep it real. go to http:www.originalpoetry.com/On-The-Inside_4 and check it out tsgirl

    alejapoet commented on "Profile"

    03-05-2009

    yes you are too deep and i find that people on this site do not want to read reality they want to read curse words and drama and not some thing that will help their wicked selves.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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