rain dance

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    rain dance

     rain dance


    a rainy day
    damp and gray
    wind is blowing
    branches sway
    leaves drip water
    birds sip rain
    lakes get wetter
    umbrellas reign
    inside my place
    holding rein
    against the elements
    I remain
    comfortable glad
    watching through glass
    the wonders of nature
    not much can surpass

    ©    Linda Renzulli

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    GentleT commented on rain dance

    06-23-2009

    Yes sometime the rain also makes me feel lighter. Beautiful artistry of word to paint the picture.
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    featherwriter

    06/24/2009

    Thank you, I''m glad you enjoyed it.

    jademelissa74 commented on rain dance

    06-23-2009

    The magical phrasesarranged to compose this piece are absolutely incredible! A wonderful poem! Thank you for sharing it!
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    featherwriter

    06/24/2009

    You're welcome, and thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it

    kjacobs commented on rain dance

    06-23-2009

    I love this poem. It was a beautiful read. It set a calm comforting feeling within me.
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    featherwriter

    06/24/2009

    Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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