RUGGED WAR

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  • Lost Love

    RUGGED WAR
    MISSING SLEEP; NOT TO WEEP
    BUT BECAUSE MY SOUL IS BEAT
    RAN IT'S COURSE FIGHTING TO END
    LOVES RUGGED WAR
    IN THE END PAIN STILL SCORES
    I'M STILL NOT SURE WHAT I STAYED FOR?
    FOR IN THE PAST IT'S LEFT ME TORN
    EMOTIONALLY SCORN, & PHYSICALLY WORN
    ALL FEELINGS WITHDRAWN BUT I
    CONTINUOUSLY
    KEEP ON CAUSE I'M MISSING SOMETHING
    LIKE A ROSE WHO'S LOST A THORN

    XSIGN'E & SEAL'D [P][R][A][D][A]

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    cottonluv commented on RUGGED WAR

    02-10-2009

    this is good, like the flow of it.good work
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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