MISTAKES (THEM,US,YOU & ME)

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MISTAKES (THEM,US,YOU & ME)

TEMPORARY INSANITY
THOSE WHO DON'T ACKNOWLEDGE ARE BOUND TO REPEAT
POWERFUL WORDS THAT WERE SHARED WITH ME
IT'S US TO ME
TO NOW BELIEVE
BEFORE I LOVE HIM,
I GOTTA LOVE ME
AND WHAT U ACCEPT IS
WHAT YOU'LL RECEIVE
SOMETIMES WHAT YOU EXPECT
IS WHERE YOU'RE DECEIVED AND
WHAT YOU REGRET YOU'LL POSSEBLY REPEAT
JUST BECAUSE WE FAILED TO SEE
MISTAKES
MADE BY THEM, US, YOU, & ME!

XSIGN'D & SEAL'D [P][R][A][D][A]

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butgadiana commented on MISTAKES (THEM,US,YOU & ME)

06-25-2009

Try working on it a little longer....just a suggestion.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

PRADA09’s Poems (16)

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Title Comments
RUGGED WAR 2
IT'S OVER ...PART 1 1
LOVE SICK 2
MISTAKES (THEM,US,YOU & ME) 2
A FEW SHORT WORDS 1
I TO I; EYE TO EYE 0
LIFE WOTHOUT LOVE 2
MY PIECES OF LOOSELEAF 1
PASSION 3
~SWEET NOTHINGS IN MY EAR~ 1
SCRAMBLED 0
TRUTH B TOLD 0
THIS IS ME ... PART 2 -1
THIS IS ME ...PART 1 3
JUS A THOUGHT 0
LOST 1; FOUND 2 0