THIS IS ME ...PART 1

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    THIS IS ME ...PART 1
    I GO THROUGH LIFE WITH EMPTY PROMISES
    FORCED TO FOCUS
    ONLY TO FIND
    I AM A THINKER!
    EYE DREAM MORE THAN EYE AM AWAKE
    MY MIND AHEAD OF TIME
    SO HOW CAN I BE LATE?

    ONLY THE ACT OF EMOTIONS CAN HAVE A REACTION TO SET MY MIND
    FREE FROM ITSELF
    WHILE THINKING OF THE NEXT MOVE
    TO JUDGE THE DANCE WITH CAUTIOUS STEPS

    SCARED THAT THE NEXT MOVE I MAKE
    COULD BE FATAL
    BUT I HAVE TO BREATHE EASY
    INHALE, EXHALE 1,2,3

    XSIGN'D & SEAL'D [P][R][A][D][A]

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    hdmac commented on THIS IS ME ...PART 1

    07-27-2009

    I don't like all those capitals. Just use common letters more.
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    sweetcheeks commented on THIS IS ME ...PART 1

    02-23-2009

    nice, & deep with true feeling
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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