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  • Love
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  • Emotional
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  • Lost Love
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  • Sadness
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  • Passion
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  • Confusion
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  • Angst

    Poem Commentary

    This is a sad little thing i wrote because i'm sad...why wont they love me

    Run

    Run quickly to my side, my love,
    and hold me oh so close.
    The feel of your skin is so intoxicating,
    and your eyes are so damn hypnotizing.

    I think I'm lost in loving you.

    But.  My.  Love is unrequited,
    and it kills me to think of you,
    holding and touching someone else,
    and not knowing I'm here too!

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    tykehall commented on Run

    01-05-2010

    really like it when one conveys so much emotions with just a few words or phrases like this one does.that's kind of how i like to style most of my writing.examples r, 'sparks','sing memorabilia sing',and 'feeling acquainted,are we?' oh and 'happily married' these r all one or two sentences and again thanx for sharing
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    stellar commented on Run

    12-17-2009

    Ahhh...This is an inspiration of so intense a love...and love to read the heart of this,,I know when you wrote this you are beaming with love...^_^ v
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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