Searching

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  • Love

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    Probably the only poem I've ever written that rhymes. I wrote this about two or three years ago. It's about someone I met who inspired me. I was also attracted to him, but never got the chance to tell him. After that, I never saw nor heard from him again. The sad thing is that even now, I wonder from time to time how he is.

    Searching

     Face to face
    That's how we met
    Both you and I
    I'll never forget

    But just as suddenly
    You weren't there
    Just left with no trace
    Gone without a care

    Did I dream you
    Were you real
    Was it imagination
    That only I could feel

    Where are you now
    I'm sure that you exist
    To one day see you again
    It is what I wish

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    GinasDiamond commented on Searching

    11-09-2009

    Very good! He Just may enter your life when you least expected! stay in prayer, and ask for a positive, good man to enter your life. Make sure he has money also,LOL. Keep up the good work.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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