Searching

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    Probably the only poem I've ever written that rhymes. I wrote this about two or three years ago. It's about someone I met who inspired me. I was also attracted to him, but never got the chance to tell him. After that, I never saw nor heard from him again. The sad thing is that even now, I wonder from time to time how he is.

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     Face to face
    That's how we met
    Both you and I
    I'll never forget

    But just as suddenly
    You weren't there
    Just left with no trace
    Gone without a care

    Did I dream you
    Were you real
    Was it imagination
    That only I could feel

    Where are you now
    I'm sure that you exist
    To one day see you again
    It is what I wish

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    GinasDiamond commented on Searching

    11-09-2009

    Very good! He Just may enter your life when you least expected! stay in prayer, and ask for a positive, good man to enter your life. Make sure he has money also,LOL. Keep up the good work.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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