Shattered

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  • Lost Love
    • ValentineD
    • is tired going to go try to sleep hopefully no nightmares

    Shattered

    I want to hold,
    the Moon that shines.
    Live the dreams where,
    never will I die.
    Behold my love in,
    anothers eye.
    To behold such,
    wonder wich hasnt been plundered.
    To hold the one,
    whom feels so dear.
    Alas all thats left.
    All i find.
    Dreams Shattered
    and
    Left Behind.

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    Chaos128 commented on Shattered

    08-11-2009

    Very affecting verse. An solicitied point if I may, ValentineD, I have found (through unpleasant experience) that we're never so shattered that we can't put the pieces back together and emerge stronger; not only stronger than before, but stronger than we'd ever dare imagine.
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    ValentineD

    08/12/2009

    thanx u much and it seems as such doesnt it.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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