An Angel In My Eyes: For Jordan

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    For someone hwom is dear to my heart

    An Angel In My Eyes: For Jordan

     An angel In My Eyes


    Fell to earth,
    Lit every conner
    with light
    ever so bright.
    The darkness ran with fright.
    What fell form earth,
    so beutiful
    an angel.
    That angel was you,
    Luck was with me,
    for you seemed ment for me.
    Was it folly,
    or a dream.
    Horrid would it be if this is but a dream,
    but your still there
    right where you fell from
    heaven.

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    BooTz commented on An Angel In My Eyes: For Jordan

    06-30-2009

    this is a very pretty piece. the flow is calm&easy. very well done daniel ;p
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    Chaos128 commented on An Angel In My Eyes: For Jordan

    06-30-2009

    Sharp stuff, Val. There's brightness in your words and well as your descriptions, and the feelings you're expressing are vividly clear.
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    ValentineD

    06/30/2009

    thanx chaos

    Benny commented on An Angel In My Eyes: For Jordan

    06-25-2009

    Its so lovely poem. I enjoyed it so much. You are the angel of the earth
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    Raven1721 commented on An Angel In My Eyes: For Jordan

    06-25-2009

    i love it. it's very beautiful and very passionate.
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    superjayallday commented on An Angel In My Eyes: For Jordan

    06-24-2009

    simple but very touching great read straight from the heart
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    ValentineD

    06/24/2009

    thank very much

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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