FALLING

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    i almost gotthis published before but at the time i decided not to biggest mistake ever so plz help me to get it back

    FALLING

     Falling  
    Falling like my Heart
      For you
       Falling like the autumn leaves
       in all their hues
      Falling like the winds
      in the hollows
      Falling like the water
      my tears well
      Falling
     they hit  the ground at the gravestone 
    of the past memories gone 
    but still they last.

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    horhae commented on FALLING

    07-10-2009

    very nice,i can relate to how you were feeling when you wrote it good job!
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    Darkxaster commented on FALLING

    07-01-2009

    i liked it thank you for the good read sir keep writing
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    passionsdance commented on FALLING

    06-30-2009

    wonderful piece. I love this . you should certainly get published... be careful posting your work though , you dont want anyone to take it . Make sure its copywritten. you have a great talent to be so young . Keep writing!!!!
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    BooTz commented on FALLING

    06-30-2009

    i love this piece. it's very emotional & sincere. i can see the similies pertaining to this poem.very well put together ;p
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    WinterFrost commented on FALLING

    06-30-2009

    Love it get it published !
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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