Shock & Awe

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  • Childhood

    Shock & Awe

    In passing,
    he grabbed my finger -
    a bright sweet-faced little boy
    he squeezed.

    It was nothing to him -
    a simple gesture in the flash of a moment.
    He was there and then gone.

    How did he come to choose me?
    Middle-aged, fat
    and having had no children of my own,
    I was unused to impulsive little boys.

    The shock of this pure act rippled through my body
    and when it reached my heart I grabbed it
    and held it with awe.

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    poorpoet71 commented on Shock & Awe

    06-22-2010

    A very simple poem. Those are the best in my opinion. Good read! I really like your imagery you present.

    sk commented on Shock & Awe

    03-23-2009

    Children will do that to you; They don't have to be yours to touch your heart.

    WordSlinger commented on Shock & Awe

    03-20-2009

    He seen you as a beautiful person, I gave this poem a 9

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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