somthings wrong with me...

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somthings wrong with me...

somethings wrong with me..
someone help me please - unleashed these
feelings i cant seem to control...
apart of me feels free but the other half just cant let go
im fallin in  pit of bullshit - but this is all i know
all i wanted was a smile aint had one n awhile
im wonderin where did it go....
i couldnt figure this all out, so im tryin to take things slow
no matter how i look at the equation the only answer
i get is an i really just dont know...

theres somethin really wrong with me...
im not this bad i dont act this  way voluntarily...
people keep telling me maybe i should seek some therapy...

you make me feel....
like i am broken....
you make me feel....
like im not a person....
.

so spoke to man that i didnt know
he questioned my personality and he asked me this i quote
"when was the last time you found yourself in love?"
i didnt know what to say because the whole point of this
was to get over her..... so if i answered truthfully i'd be stuck
i looked back at him with a blank face and muttered;
"ok i get it i just give up..."

theres somethin really wrong with me...
im not this bad i dont act this  way voluntarily...
people keep telling me maybe i should seek some therapy...

you make me feel....
like i am broken....
you make me feel....
like im not a person....


i found my way back to your front door leavin this voicemail
wonderin if u were home but i guess ur not so oh well
i feel like i've failed myself actin like a chick searchin for a fairytale
ended up so in love now i am crushed in ur driveway thinkin w..t...f...
am i doin here.. can't blame the booz cuz i aint had a beer
must have the blue's its all that i hear...
hopin to wake up in time somewhere down the line
when you are not here...
i miss u so much.. wish i could give up
these feelings we dont share....

theres somethin really wrong with me...
im not this bad i dont act this  way voluntarily...
people keep telling me maybe i should seek some therapy...

you make me feel....
like i am broken....
you make me feel....
like im not a person....


i guess u can say im caught n the mix - crushed waitin for my heart to fix
this aint a problem this is somethin far more permanent...shit..
solutions im far far from it...this...is exactly where i didnt wanna be
didnt wanna think that i'd sail crash an sink...
now im throwin up my emotions like im drunk
and this mic is my toilet seat... i guess im a mess even when im at my best
i feel incomplete...

theres somethin really wrong with me...
im not this bad i dont act this way voluntarily...
people keep telling me maybe i should seek some therapy...

you make me feel....
like i am broken....
you make me feel....
like im not a person....

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kittman101 commented on somthings wrong with me...

07-01-2009

the poem itself is a true work of art, it flows like a song, and the wording is awesome. Keep up the good work. and lifes experiences will show you the way to greatness

DeepEclipse commented on somthings wrong with me...

07-01-2009

Smooth write. Flowed like a song, but had the wordplay of a poem. You've captured a good style in your writes. keep floodin the page.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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