Steps to Surrender

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    Steps to Surrender

    Wondering

    Pondering

     

    Hoping

    Wishing

     

    If only

    This or that

     

    Looking back

    Remembering

     

    Hard

    Breathe

     

    Accept

    Acknowledge

     

    Understand

    Admit

     

    Meet

    Deal

     

    Change

    Control

     

    Walk on

    Move

     

    Reflect

    Contemplate

     

    Relax

    Composed

     

    Peaceful

    Serene

     

    Content

    Hope

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    HarverTomsson commented on Steps to Surrender

    07-20-2009

    As choice pearls on a necklace, each paired word stanza shines with unique splender, if only becasue they rest on your golden chain of thought.
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    Mel

    07/20/2009

    Thank you for your comment...your comment alone is already a good piece of poetry :)

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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