Upside down

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    Upside down
    A feeling that’s felt but
    Can’t be touched
    To feel so connected
    But yet unplugged

    Like a spinning top
    Going round and round
    It’s a world so perfect
    But upside down

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    gypsyf8 commented on Upside down

    07-13-2009

    "in a world so perfect - but upside down" i love that phrase -- i have been there so many times . . . excellent read -- thank you for sharing !! Great Job!!
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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