Stripped

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    Stripped
    I am a lady who wears a disguise.
    This whore who protects me is beginning to fail.
    Realizing the error of my ways, the mask is lost.
    Beneath this costume, lies a truth.
    Halloween is over, I feel naked.

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    hdmac commented on Stripped

    06-12-2009

    So this whole thing is about halloween? Or is it just being used as a symbol for your pain? Interesting.
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    aggieprof commented on Stripped

    03-25-2009

    Very good. I also like the last line, particularly after the first.
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    hx commented on Stripped

    01-23-2009

    Nice indeed. Last line is great.
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    hx commented on Stripped

    11-25-2008

    Very nice indeed - brevity with absolutely nothing lost. Well done, keep it up.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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