SWEET INSANITY

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    I WROTE THIS POEM WHEN I WAS USING METH AND I FELT MY WORLD SPINNING OUT OF CONTROL. WRITING IS MY RELEASE WHEN I HAVE NOTHING ELSE LEFT... I HAVE BEEN CLEAN FOR 3 YRS NOW AND I AM SO GLAD I WAS ABLE TO PULL MYSELF FROM THE VERY DEPTHS OF MY OWN PERSONAL HELL...

    SWEET INSANITY

    I SIT HERE AMONGST CHAOS AND FEAR CLOSING MY EYES TO MY UNSHED TEARS.

     FEELING VULNERABLE, IMPRISIONED UNABLE TO BARE.

     SCREAMING OUT LOUD HOW CAN LIFE BE SO UNFAIR?

    OH, THE TURMOIL, THE EMOTIONS, MY PHYSICAL PAIN!

     DYING INSIDE WITH NO HOPE OF CHANGE.

     SUFFERING FROM MY INNER RAGE WITH NO ONE BUT MYSELF TO BLAME!

     WHY?

     I CRY WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME?

     WHAT IS THIS LIFE?

     WHAT DOES IT MEAN?

     WONDERING HOW THINGS CAME TO BE.

     WILL THIS FOREVER BE MY REALITY?

    OH, HOW I LONG TO SUCCUMB TO SWEET, SWEET INSANITY....
    BY VANESSA BROWN

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    cocothepoet commented on SWEET INSANITY

    02-12-2010

    That was beautiful and so heart felt!!! Loved it!!
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    Ivelisse commented on SWEET INSANITY

    02-12-2010

    This is nicely written. The intenional emotions were felt and the words were right. Let me know if you write more. I loved it.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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