PLEASE

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    THIS POEM DESCRIBES HOW MORBID OBESITY MAKES ME FEEL. TO BE TRAPPED IN A LIVING PRISON I ALONE BUILT FOR MYSELF. IT IS A RAW EMOTION FOR ME BUT BEST DESCRIBES ME IN UTTER HONESTY...

    PLEASE

    MY TORTUROUS THOUGHTS INSIDE MY HEAD ARE TWISTING MY EMOTIONS ONE BY ONE. HOW AM I TO SURVIVE WHO I'VE BECOME?
    I HAVE MADE A FOOL OF MYSELF ONCE AGAIN. WILL THESE SELF DESTRUCTIVE WAYS NEVER END?
    LOST,SCARED,AND ALONE,NEVER INSIDE MYSELF AT HOME. WANTING SO MUCH TO BREAK FREE. WON'T SOMEONE PLEASE, PLEASE HELP ME?
    I FEEL DESPERATE NOT KNOWING WHAT TO DO. THE ANSWERS HIDDEN SO DEEP INSIDE MYSELF, WHERE I ASK? I HAVE NO CLUE.
    I AM SO CLOSE TO THE BRINK OF INSANITY, TIRED OF TEETORING IN AND OUT OF REALITY. WANTING SO BAD TO LET GO AND FLY. WITH EYES CLOSED TIGHT AND MY ARMS SPREAD WIDE.
    NO LONGER HAVING TO CARE, OR HAVING THE URGE TO CRY. BUT WILL THIS BE THE DAY, THE DAY I DIE? FINALLY FREE FROM THIS BODY, FREE FROM THIS MIND. IS SOMETHING I TRULY LONG TO FIND.
    FEELING,LOST,SCARED,AND ALONE, NEVER INSIDE MYSELF AT HOME. WANTING SO MUCH TO BREAK FREE. WON'T SOMEONE PLEASE, PLEASE HELP ME?     
    BY VANESSA MITCHELL

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    Teardrops commented on PLEASE

    04-22-2010

    I see your pain but you have to decide for yourself what you want no one else can do that for you . Maybe its time to stop looking at the outside and seeing what a beautiful person you are inside . When this is done all else witll fall into place thanks Marie
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    Papa commented on PLEASE

    04-22-2010

    I understand . I was the fat kid in every class growing up. I have to exercise like mad and hardly eat anything. It's work. Some times it's worth it. Some times it's hard not pulling into Taco Bell.
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