THE LAST GOODBYE...

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THE LAST GOODBYE...

WHEN I THINK ABOUT THE DAY THAT YOU WENT AWAY FROM ME.
I WONDER WHAT MIGHT HAVE HAPPENED IF THINGS WERE DIFFERENT, HOW IT WOULD BE.
HOW COULD A LOVE I THOUGHT WOULD NEVER DIE END THE WAY IT DID?
I WISH I COULD TAKE BACK EVERYTHING I SAID. I STILL REMEMBER HOW YOU LOOKED AT ME, BEFORE  YOU WALKED AWAY.
KNOWING NOTHING COULD BE SAID TO EVER MAKE YOU STAY. SO I HUNG MY HEAD AND CRIED, STRIPPED OF ALL EXCEPT MY PRIDE, FEELING MY SOUL SLOWLY DIE, KNOWING THAT THIS IS OUR LAST GOODBYE...

THE MEMORY STILL BRINGS ME SO MUCH PAIN. WONDERING WHERE YOU ARE. DO YOU FEEL THE SAME? BUT THIS I'LL NEVER KNOW, ALWAYS REGRETTING I LET YOU GO.

I STILL REMEMBER HOW YOU LOOKED AT ME , BEFORE YOU WALKED AWAY, KNOWING NOTHING COULD BE SAID TO EVER MAKE YOU STAY. SO I HUNG MY HEAD AND CRIED, STRIPPED OF ALL EXCEPT MY PRIDE, FEELING MY SOUL SLOWLY DIE, KNOWING THAT THIS IS OUR LAST GOODBYE.....


                                                                       BY VANESSA MITCHELL

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GucciGurl commented on THE LAST GOODBYE...

02-12-2010

You have just read my heart and now I sit and cry. ILook for my up and coming If I had Only Know it Would have been the last time. Sometimes if we could go back in time. Thank you for sayin the things I needed to say.

Scorpio73 commented on THE LAST GOODBYE...

02-08-2010

The emotional conflict you let the reader feel, is very strong. This poem not only is good, but it touched me on a very personal level.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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