Sweet Relese


  • Fantasy

    Sweet Relese

    Sitting alone on a bench. She wonders where her life has went.

    She had a love that's dead and gone. Now she's sad cause she's all alone.

    Her children are grown and moved away. But their love always stays.

    She sits on the bench to remember the day, that her husband said he would never stray.

    They were together for such a long time. She wonders why he had to die.

    Suddenly the bench moves then shakes. She turns to see her husbands face.

    She is so shocked she cannot speak. He says to her my heart was weak.

    A single tear runs down her cheek. she turns away so he cannot peek.

    He says i know that you love me, but why must you hide your tears from me?

    She says to him i am ashamed. What could i do i am not as strong as you.

    He looks at her and takes her hand. Then he says come with me to our promise land.

    She wraps her arms around his neck, and then she says what the heck.

    She lays down on the bench and sighs. She kisses her husband and then she dies.

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    Drivingczar commented on Sweet Relese


    Love lost released in love verses! Nice write!

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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