Tangled and happy

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    Tangled and happy

    Tangled in a web of chain
    Caught with others
    Holding the link that will release us all

    Seeing the tight knots I have woven over a lifetime
    Sticking my finger in the middle
    To loose the bent loops free.

    Sitting, staring, fiddling with the only strand ready to come loose

    I pause... slightly

    What if I'm free?

    Free to just be.

    And I keep detangling the chain.

    As the necklace begins to unveil itself with smashed links

    I place it around my neck again.

    Noticing. It's easy to sway in the wind.

    Along the crook of a neck

    Suspended and link linked together with all the rest.

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    simoneaugustus commented on Tangled and happy

    10-09-2009

    You have an amazing talent! I will definitely be looking for more of your wrok in the future. Have you been published? If not, you should look into it.

    Ani

    10/14/2009

    Thank you for the comments... I published a few books years back and am encouraged. Just putting my toes back in the water. :+) Thank you again.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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