Teardrops

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Teardrops

You sit in the dark

as you pour out your heart

each teardrop a stain on the page...

 

the moment it starts

it all falls apart

from laughter to anger, then rage...

 

there once was a time

when dance stepped with rhyme

your heart glowed with the thought of each day...

 

but these days you find

that love's not so kind

and hearts break, as they're parting their ways

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Trista3 commented on Teardrops

10-29-2013

I have read a few of your poems and though they are short they express the dark places we all feel lost in at times. more words would ruin them. good job. well written.

Ivelisse commented on Teardrops

01-10-2012

I love this. Its how I feel sometimes.. -Nice write.

britt commented on Teardrops

08-31-2010

This is great. I know the feeling, Great right though; Keep writing an expressing your feeling, - your friend britt

JEAGLEFEATHER commented on Teardrops

05-06-2010

Another great poem. Continue to work your craft; you have the gift.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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