The Dream

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    The Dream
    From a wish of a star, Life seemed so far
    The very distance from the sun
    I heard a faint whisper of a gun
    I could not scream, I could not shout
    As my mind stood still this very bout.
    The shadow seemed so near
    It gave me shivers and fear.
    As it started moving closer, I just stood there.
    I could not awake from this very nightmare,
    As the shadow in my dreams did appear.
    I tried to let out a sound
    But all in my dreams I could not be found.

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    JoeCaine commented on The Dream

    11-23-2009

    Great write,really enjoyed how you brought It all together.I have felt that way many times.
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    optimistic commented on The Dream

    05-04-2009

    Interesting I tried understanding until the end i stopped and thought this is awesome
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    Bethane1978 commented on The Dream

    04-28-2009

    Ecellent
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    Enelya commented on The Dream

    04-26-2009

    I like this, it's interesting though i can't put my finger on it. I do, however, absolutely love the last line best of all.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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