The Dream

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The Dream

The rain is like acid
The water and pain
Drops down in vain
Your skin starts to melt
The blood from your veins
Pours out in every witch way
You think for a moment
You raise your head
And yet once again
You are just in your bed

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WordSlinger commented on The Dream

04-01-2009

I hate when that happens, lol But then a better dream appears, lol

AIXA commented on The Dream

03-25-2009

Dreams are the patterns of my life too.

dangedmanjr commented on The Dream

03-14-2009

I'm a big fan of the dream world...and this one, though short, had me going...nice hook!

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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