The Great Escape

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    The Great Escape

    Do you love me? Then let’s escape to Treasure Island and unlock this chest of love

    Go deep within this sea of burning desire and quench this passionate fire

    Surf the tides of ecstasy and ride the waves of this harmonious melody

    Let’s glide to the rhythm of the night sounds as our bodies gaze under the stars

    Softly and tenderly fingering the outline of the moonlit sky

    Our dancing shadows upon the ground celebrating this love found

    Angelic whispers of heaven sent themes tracing our inner being

    The beauty of this great escape ringing in my ears telling me don’t turn back let’s build upon this rock and carve our hearts into this love for years

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    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on The Great Escape

    01-03-2011

    Beautiful, wistful, and poetic. I enjoyed this one..........E
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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