The Other Woman

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    The Other Woman
    AS I SIT UNDER THE WEEPING WILLOW TREE ON THE ROOFTOP SIPPING A STRAWBERRIE LEMONADE WHILE STARING INTO YOUR EYES I BECOME MESMERIZED REMINSCING ON ME AND YOU AND THESE 14 MONTHS THAT WEVE BEEN THROUGH WONDERING WHY I WASTED SO MUCH TIME JUST TO BE TOLD THAT I WASNT THE WOMAN BUT THE OTHER WOMAN HOW DARE YOU TAKE MY LOYALTY AND USE IT FOR YOUR ROYALTY YOU MESSED WITH MY HEART AND TORE MY THOUGHTS OF OUR FUTURE APART YOU LEFT ME EMPTY HEARTED EMOTIONALLY HEMERRAGING INSIDE IVE CRIED MANY A RIVER BUT AS I SIT UNDER THE WEEPING WILLOW TREE ON THE ROOFTOP SIPPING A STRAWBERRIE LEMONADE WHILE STARING IN YOUR EYES I BECOME MESMERIZED AS I REMINSCE ON THE REALIY OF KNOWING THAT I WILL ALWAYS BE THE OTHER WOMAN

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    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on The Other Woman

    01-03-2011

    I believe this happens more time than we know. A woman is not aware that she is the other woman. Believing she is the only one, she is as much a victim as the wife or SO. You captured this predicament and the feelings that come with it very well............E
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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on The Other Woman

    12-29-2010

    I have been the wife and I have been the other woman. Both parts came with a price I still don't think I can pay. I am so sorry, and this a great poem. Sometimes love can be so unfair especially when you find someone else is there. Broken moments and hateful outburst that when things became the worst. I feel for you, and pray for a happy ending:)
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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