The other Cinderella Story

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The other Cinderella Story

When shall this be over?
the walk if lonely tears
the pain,
the tears,
the yelling,
all of this took to her body like a disease
never ceasing, never ending, always intensifying then slowly numbing

When would her fairy tale begin
the rewards of success,
the fun with others,
the touch of a lover

It was never to come for this Cinderella
She was locked up for so long that she found comfort in the dark
She did her duties silently, never causing a fuss
She always felt tormented by the others
because other people had what she craved for....
Her peace, her happiness, her joys.

All she had was her pain, sorrows, and tears
The only reward she received was broken glass and more pain.

She never got the chance to find her Prince Charming....

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bluewolf commented on The other Cinderella Story

04-08-2011

Love, the epitome of happiness and yet it is quite often the source of our greatest pain and sorrow. Even as we endeavor to grasp what eludes so many, fail time and time again, we find that despite this grief we may endure, when we at last find that soul mate we rejoice the experience. Good write.

Musicmynded1 commented on The other Cinderella Story

03-18-2011

Nice outlet of emotion as a write, i know of an even other Cinderella, she is locked away with her prince charming and their both going insane together, with no others around... lonely together they search for wat u speak of.. "fun with others"

girlygirl1234 commented on The other Cinderella Story

03-08-2011

i like it alot...very very flowing with the right words spoken from a true heart...good job sis

sk8erpoet commented on The other Cinderella Story

03-08-2011

i love it sis...its amazing....key word..amazing..great write..sk8

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