The Phoenix’s Song

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    The Phoenix’s Song

    A spark, a flare, all my world in despair.
    I fell to the earth, a meteor, a comet of flame.
    Burning to nothing, I fell in shame.
    All was black for what seemed an eon…
    Then I heard, once again, a beacon a call from beyond.
    “My son, what has all your majesty become?
    From atop the world you have fallen,
    consumed by pride in your fame.
    Your life has ended, it is gone
    all because you would not release your song.”

    The words like weights fell upon my heart.
    Acceptance of the truth took its part,
    upon the remains of my body.
    The fire, once painful, reignited with a start.
    This new fire burned intensely like the last,
    instead of pain, peace filled my heart and I let go of the past.
    The pride that led me to my fate fades away,
    a fresh and unsoiled ego grows in its place.

    My body stirs a new heart starts to pace.
    Ashes are taken by a passing wind, leaving not a trace.
    New plumage takes the spot of chard
    as my wings snap into place,
    muscle, sinew and tendon pop
    as my body grows anew from a broken base.

    A blur of color and light.
    I see again,
    as I did the moon of my first night.
    The world appears changed,
    bathed in a new light.
    What before was dull and drab,
    now is keen and bright.
    I find my voice upon my heart
    swelling with such strength,
    A song I have never knew before breaks the air
    and the ground begins to quake.

    The weight once upon me has gone.
    My soul soars again and takes flight.
    I gently stroke my wings giving me rise.
    A voice once more I hear below,
    “My son, you are alive.
    It is your song which makes you grow.
    Sing it and arise.” 
    I burst forth into the sky
    higher and higher I climb,
    past the clouds and into the light.

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    poetess716 commented on The Phoenix’s Song

    06-16-2009

    wow! Will, I'm impressed. I could SEE everything you spoke of. For someone who hasnt written poetry until recently, yes your heart has a lot to say. This is gorgeous, and exquisite and I'll be coming back to check on your work. You really should submit this for publishing. You have a talent and a rare gift. Thank you for asking me to read it. I'm glad I did. xxx, Karen

    Will28

    06/16/2009

    Thank you for taking the time I love your poems I'm gonna have to read more later.

    Hampton commented on The Phoenix’s Song

    06-16-2009

    Another great poem with the Phoenix as its subject. You have developed a rare talent forpainting pictures with your words.

    Will28

    06/16/2009

    Thank you much. Please read my revision when I post it ( much better

    Butterfly49 commented on The Phoenix’s Song

    06-11-2009

    A beautiful picture has been painted by your words. Bring your revision here to show the world how a real artist does it.

    jademelissa74 commented on The Phoenix’s Song

    06-08-2009

    Wow! Very impressive imagery you have managed to portray. I truly enjoy the content of this poem. Acceptance and courage is a hell of a recipe to live your days forth. A ten from me! God bless!

    Will28

    06/16/2009

    Thanks! I try to write what I live and vice versa. Now just gotta remember not write about flying anymore... (don't have wings you know, and grvity doesn't lend it's graces to poets anymore than it does to a bowling ball) LOL

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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