The Red Ottoman

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    The Red Ottoman

    The Red Ottoman  

    Dark room, items arranged just right, proper width, perfect height

    A sensual setup for the freaking tonight 

    Participants seductively enter the room, lights are dim positions assumed, on the Red Ottoman located in the far left had corner of the room not the right 

    Passionate kisses placed upon his lips, as she strategically adjusts her ample hips, grasping the arms of the forward chair, a chair strategically placed there, in front of the

     Red Ottoman located in the far left hand corner of the room not the right 

    He enters she sighs and moans, a sexual symphony back ground his groans, fully she takes him inside her warm, accepting, wet space, a look of pleasure covers his face

    On top of the

     Red Ottoman located in the far left hand corner of the room not the right 

    The intimate dance begins her hips fill his hands, he holds on for dear life, drilling her with the sharpness of a knife, a rhythmic sync has been devised, passion and desire fills two sets of eyes, he picks up the pace with a vengeance, she vows to pledge her allegiance, to a spot on top of the

     Red Ottoman located in the far left hand corner of the room not the right 

    He applies pressure then a slow release, conjuring feelings that curl the toes on her feet, softly she recites his name (Jay), and intensely he reenters the game 

    He drills, she becomes tight preparing to give him a delight, a delight that will take him straight under for the night, on top of the

    Red Ottoman, Located in the far left hand corner of the room not the right 

    Moisture fills her warm space drenching him, while creating a look of intense pleasure upon his face, he feels a hug from her warm wet space, and she leaves a DNA trace on top of TheRed Ottoman (located in the far left hand corner of the room not the right).

    True Story

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    SoulEncounters commented on The Red Ottoman

    10-10-2009

    LOL...Another selection of the prowess of the inner dwellings of passion that escapes through your pen:-) Enjoyed the second piece...BlaQ Reign

    cryptic77 commented on The Red Ottoman

    06-25-2009

    I dig it and that it is a true story tell me this do you share the poetry with the willing muse? I often let them see it but never confirm if the poem was or is inspired by them.. then I share it with the world.

    Paolo commented on The Red Ottoman

    06-25-2009

    Here in this poem is an encounter between two lovers and in this work it is the woman that shows us. We are given a very vivid, breath taking portal into this event. I found the repeated line, "red ottoman located in the far left hand corner of the room, not on the right". The placement of this line is strategic in that it keeps us from being completely taken away in the heat of the passionate moments. In structure of the poem there is something I feel could be omitted that is unneeded and deflects the poem for a moment such as, " DNA". In my opinion I would have understood if it read, "she leaves a trace on top of the Red Ottoman. Other than this one place this is a superior poem and one I would read again.

    Velvet

    06/26/2009

    thank you for the honest critique, i am glad you enjoyed it, the reference to the DNA is an inside joke between my lover and I. I can see how it could have been left out. Again thank you.

    ianraiseland commented on The Red Ottoman

    06-25-2009

    intrigueing focus on the ottoman. . .a very sensual peice. your own experience is the best to write. all in all, i like the flow. unorthodox but well built. your expression of feeling creates fine imagery.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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