The Voice of A Child
I cannot speak for I am a child, but through your faith I could be heard clear and loud. Isee you as back and forth the halls you pace and the tears that runs down you face. Please don't worry lets just take a minute for you and me to prayer. You know I am in good place, which is in the hands of the one who created me in the first place. We all go through struggles mine just came a little early in life. I know this seems to be a heavy plight but don't loose sight of God and his Glorious light. So from this moment on Please totally trust God and not man for it is God that guides his thoughts and his hands. It is only God that knows what plans he has for me so man can't say what I can or cannot grow to do are be, for my life is in God's hand and I pray that you would put yours there with meThe Voice of A Child
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Poem Commentary
This is the voice of a child in the hospital to young to speak trying to comfort his mother trough faith, letting her know that God has everything in control just trust him
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danmartyjake1 commented on The Voice of A Child
09-03-2009
- A few typos but a beautiful collection of words . Very nicely expressed. The child obviously reached you and now the child lives through your expression,too, to reach others.
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ccslim commented on The Voice of A Child
09-02-2009
- It's a good thing this child can can read and type because Sis this is a good write! I find by content a message, trust, Faith and wOOt Love! I did feel small hiccups in flow when I voiced this aloud. Overall a wOOt of a write!
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09/02/2009
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GennyferCoss commented on The Voice of A Child
09-01-2009
- Wow! This is soooo powerful, I am impressed! It is so true that if we will just put our trust in God and not man we will be amazed at what He will do! Keep your faith, let your light shine, someone may come to salvation because they see God in you!
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photochick commented on The Voice of A Child
09-01-2009
- this is very sweet and powerful I greatly enjoyed it and look forward to reading more of your poetry there is alot of passion here and the flow is that of a grand story your imagery is great and really lets the reader connect great write adn message keep on writing thansk for sharing just be careful and watch your spelling you are a speed typer like me it looks like but they are small things and don't take away from the greatness of this poem at all keep it up you have a lot of talent
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09/01/2009
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