The Wrong Key to Her Heart

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    • LupayGarcia
    • is chillen and needs to write some poetry

    The Wrong Key to Her Heart

    As the days drag on I think of her

    Her perfect smile, her warm body embracing me, and her never ending love

    Her heart is as pure as a dove

    I just wonder where we went wrong

    I thought what we had was lifelong

    Our love was a perfect circle, but now is oblong

     And it’s partly my fault for being so headstrong

    I was arrogant and self-centered

    I’m not sure how into this phase I entered

    And now I’m most definitely missing her

    But it’s not just my fault for she was a great actor

    Making false claims to love was a great factor

    She totally had me fooled

    Our “perfect” relationship was misruled

    I found this out the hard way

    On that dreadful rainy day

    I walked in on her and another guy

    Just as they were saying bye

    But I could see it in her eyes

    And could read all the lame latent lies

    I finally knew the truth

    I figured it out as if I were a sleuth

    She was so ignorant in her youth

    And now I know what she’s really about

    And I’m glad I finally found out

    She wasn’t in it for love

    But was in it for lust

    But it’s ok because I can find a way to adjust

    I can move on without her

    There is still a glimmer of hope

    I’ve just got to keep on climbing and get over that slope

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    sk8erpoet commented on The Wrong Key to Her Heart

    05-31-2010

    i love the emotion that got put into this.....i loved the poem......great write......sk8

    purdylox commented on The Wrong Key to Her Heart

    07-06-2009

    I really like this it sounds so dark but ends with hope and light that is so wonderful and true great job.

    StandingBear commented on The Wrong Key to Her Heart

    05-30-2009

    A great attitude concerning a very personal relationship. ______________________________ Great write. 9

    LupayGarcia

    06/01/2009

    thanks bro...that means a lot...I'm glad you liked it

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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