these words you tell me

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  • Death

    these words you tell me
    these words you tell me,
    are they just lies.
    these lies you tell me,
    are they just words.
    your words run through my veins
    making me insane, there my addiction,
    my drug. this high, i want to come down.
    will it ever end, is there such thing
    as a rehab from you?
    will i ever break free, from your
    unfriendly grasp. take this knife?
    for me?? no for you! slit your throat.
    ive found my way out, through your death

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    bforibus commented on these words you tell me

    07-17-2009

    but is it really a way out. or just a shadow from the truth. the emotions of hate and regret still lie at the end of this poem. i do love the ups and downs of emotions. very much enjoyed reading this . great job.
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