our inner selves

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    our inner selves

    our inner desires
    are disturbing.
    our thought horrifying.
    our love is true yet false
    and our hugs are cold.
    we might live among the living
    but we lie among the dead

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    Rainz commented on our inner selves

    04-03-2009

    Most people live waiting to die, I, I live waiting to live. Good job!
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    origionalmerlin commented on our inner selves

    03-21-2009

    Thantaposis?? greek root thantos(death + study) suggest you read some flaminco poetry/ lyrics... hmmm
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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