Thinking About You Part II

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    Thinking About You Part II

    Thinking about you part two I continue to write.
    And there is no place i'd rather be then between your thighs tonight.
    Your love is like ran on a hot summer day.
    And if I had one wish it would be for your most lustful kiss.
    Forever blowing my mind with the things you do.
    All I have to say is I'm thinking of you.
    If thinking was a crime i would have a death sentence.
    I know lust is a sin so I pray a prayer of repentence.
    Just thinking of you causes me to want you even more.
    I know you hear me knocking so open the door.
    I feel so lonely when you're no around.
    When I think of you I paint a wondrful picture of the love I've found.
    The way you make me feel is so damn amazing.
    I can only imagine how I would be in the heat of love making.
    So yes Torie this poem is just for you.
    Even if I'm not there I'm thinking of you.

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    Chi commented on Thinking About You Part II

    04-17-2009

    Hay Mister: Cotton is my little sister and I no you picked a winning and devoted female and there are not many left. And you poems reaches beyond the ratings of this chat. I rate this 35 on originality/ 35 on a heart felt poem/35 on its ability to sell on a hallmark card; if you take out the part about the between the thighs since Hallmark has a tade mark of famliy....but I loved it for more then a hall Mark card save the original version for Cotton as a keep sake(for-get-me-not) and have the al

    TheShowMan commented on Thinking About You Part II

    04-13-2009

    Awesome poem, a bit comical as well :).

    cottonluv commented on Thinking About You Part II

    04-13-2009

    awwwwwwwwwwwww so sweet bring tears to my eyes.love it always.xoxoxoxo

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