Those Beautiful Eyes

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    Those Beautiful Eyes

    What was my goal?
    Why do I care?
    Maybe I'm down because
    of that cold stare.

    You know what I mean,
    When you look at those eyes,
    beaten by tears,
    so easy to recognize.

    The warm, loving connection
    of the eyes has gone astray.
    The warm, loving feeling
    inside has gone away.

    Those beautiful eyes,
    that I've grown to love,
    have now become dull.
    This push changed to shove.

    And I feel so bad,
    because I did this to you,
    I made your wonderful eyes
    lose their hue.

    Why did I do it?
    Was my goal to make them tear?
    It had to have been something else,
    because that is my greatest fear...

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    juilet123 commented on Those Beautiful Eyes

    06-13-2009

    thats so sad it made me cry when i read it all of ur poems make me depressed is that ur goal 4 ur poems to make people cry or depress them?

    Tiffy commented on Those Beautiful Eyes

    06-11-2009

    that is so sad it made me cry when ii read it...idk wat it is about ur poems but when ii read them ii start to cry...ii think we have a way of concecting to people through diffternt things...for us it it through poetry

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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