Weary Soul

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Weary Soul

Agony,
torment,
the fear of death.

Heart
racing
with every breath.

Stomach
churning.
How could it be?

Why
can't
you just set me free?

My soul
is choking,
it knows only pain.

It's beaten
and broken,
it's almost been slain.

It's crying
and drowning
on it's own tears' flood.

The floor
is red
from the stain of my blood.

If only
my soul
could escape from its chains,

Then
the blood
would cease to drain.

Coiled
so tightly
around its neck,

Is
the rope
that's held it in check.

But if
you give it
a knife to cut loose,

It stabs
itself
instead of the noose.

So
instead
of it breaking free,

It only
further
suffers in me.

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KrakR commented on Weary Soul

05-13-2009

Man you are very good. Don't get lost in the dark and black thing. I've done it. People don't ten to listen very long when one is in this vein of thought. Step into the sun for a while.

Tiffy commented on Weary Soul

04-30-2009

this is a really good and deep poem...it shows your emotions and feeling about life.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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