thru your eye's

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    This is a poem I wrote about my father,he'll probably be dead before he read's this anyways....

    thru your eye's

    If I were in my Father's shoe's
    I'd probably of killed myself
    He spent his whole life,self distructing
    Took his Family for that ride too!
    Now he's got Son's and Daughter's in-law
    and Grandkid's but doesn't even know it.
    He sit's alone day an night,no one care's
    CAUSE HE WAS SELFISH
    All his Kids say he did this to himself
    And he know's they're right
    He can't go back to change the past
    But Think's there's nothing for the future
    So he sit's and waits to die,cause now
    he's got stage 3 lung cancer,and said Screw Treatment!

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    Rhymer commented on thru your eye's

    12-22-2009

    What a sad ending to a sad life. Hopefully he will see the light and try to make amends, of course it could be to late.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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